I’m so totally and completely stuck when it comes to the title of my first contemporary novel–although I do have the cover (see below).
Okay, so you want to know what the book is about? Let me give you some history. This is the first in my new contemporary Crème de la Crème series. This is the shortest book–it’s category length–and the intro book. The connection between the books is the friendship between four woman who are all share ownership the high-scale bakery Crème de la Crème (two are sisters). Tessa Stephens, baker with a specialty in breads,m and her ex-pro football player (quarterback–four Superbowl rings) boyfriend of two years, Greyson Monroe are the h/h in this first book.
After his retirement from football three years ago, Grey has a lucrative broadcasting and ad pitchman career (he vows he’ll never do any modeling though). He’s put his nasty and very high-profile marriage and divorce behind him. He’s happy the way things are between him and Tessa. Happy that is until he finds a) half of his bathroom contains a drawer full of women’s toiletry b) she’s commandeered three of his eight drawers, which now contain a color assortment of bras and thongs and c) this walk-in closet now stores more than an arm load of everything from woman’s jeans to evening dress. Sleeping over a couple a nights is one thing but moving is completely another.
Being the helpful boyfriend he is, he loads all her stuff (save the toothbrush and some underwear and bras) into a really nice duffle bag (hey, it’s got the 49ers logo on it–the genuine article) and takes it over to her (She must be missing half this stuff. He’s doing her a favor.)
Tessa is in the midst of moving their homegrown bakery business from her friend’s bakery to their first store. Life is crazy but she can’t complain, she has the career she’s always dreamed of and she’s with the love of her life and he loves her just as madly. But where’s the Hallmark card that says, Nothing says I love you more than your belongings in a duffle bag deposited at your front door. When Grey makes it clear he’ll never commit to her for the long haul, she breaks it off. And breaks her heart.
Grey is determined to get on with his life and get over Tessa. But everything he tries doesn’t work. And then when after only a two months apart she starts dating again, Grey takes a hard look into a future without Tessa and it’s…empty. Now the problem is convincing her to give him another chance. To that end, he pulls out all the stops with an offer of friendship, no strings attached (Yeah, right!). What he hadn’t planned on was having her bend his ear about other men. Over my dead body!
So that’s the gist of the book. That is NOT and I repeat NOT the back cover copy. I made that up on the fly today. But at least I now have something to work with. 🙂
Will you help me out? Help name my book? The comment with the winning title will receive a $25 eGift Certificate from an etailer of their choice.
I think it should be called “A Little Slice of Heaven”
1. The Sweetest Catch
2. Whipping Up Second Chances
3. Too Hot to Let Go
4. Doth Déclair too Much {a play off of éclair being a pastry}
Ooooh Sheeryn, I love The Sweetest Catch!
I’m glad you like it 🙂
Boule Scrimmage Bowl or Boule Scrimmage or Boule Bowl or First Down, Time Out
Your Just Desserts
A Sweet Uprising
A Taste of Paradise
I like Sheeryn’s #1 choice: “The Sweetest Catch”.
A couple more…
Sweet Indulgences
Sweet Dreams
Rising to the Heart’s Challenge
Second Chance Uprising
Love Takes the Cake
Gee, I am really not very good at this! LOL
Hmmmm… Let me think…
Playing for Crepes.
Romancing the Baketress.
The Second Chance Special.
That was fun! I hope you find your perfect title! This book sounds amazing. Having to watch the girl you love date other guys– I have to say, I love watching guys get all jealous and possessive, so this sounds delicious 😉
Ohh! Ohh! I can’t seem to resist 😉
Burning Love.
Baking for Keeps.
Winning the Baker Back/Winning His Baker Back.
Burned At His Touch. The Heat Rises. Grey’s Forward Pass. Turn Up the Heat. Grey’s Pitch. Grey’s Recipe. Sugar On Top. One Cup of Sugar. A Pinch of Salt. Cover… Let Rise. Knead For Love
Love on the Rise
You Knead Me
A Sticky Situation
Rising to the Occasion
Kneading More
Flaky Flirtations
Sweet Surrender
Tempting the Temptress
Make It or Bake It
Howdy Beverley!
Sounds like a winner!!! How about “No Strings Attached”, “The Sweetest Thing”, “Raising the Bar”, “The Ultimate Score”?
Second Chances
Any Way You Slice It
A Slice Above the Rest
Baguette Up
A Doughy Dilemma
Bakers Choice
OK, Bev, now I can’t turn my brain off! LOL This is the last suggestion, I promise!
His Sweetest Fumble
Missing A Slice of Heaven
How to Throw a Perfect Pass
How to Catch the Girl
Rising Expectations
This book sounds so good. It sounds like a great second chance plot.
Here are some possible titles:
Playing For Keeps
Out of Bounds
Catch Me If You Can
The Sweetest Tackle
Reverse Tackle
Forward Pass
Adverse Possession
Greyson’s Biggest Gamble
I think that JUST DESSERTS would be fitting because he gets what he deserves when he sees her moving on in her life. She also gets what she deserves when the man that she loves starts to realize just what he lost. And it fits with the bakery theme 🙂
How about:
The Perfect Slice
One More Chance
The Last Chance
My Second Chance
Love and the Single Baker
I’m not good at this but maybe you can work something out with one of these. Thanks for the giveaway
Sweet Surrender
Love takes the Cake
Game On
The Icing on the Cake
Tight End
If You Love Me
Love Me
Let Love In
Petit Fours
Kneading Love
The Duffle Bag Says It All
Grey’s Catch
Grey’s Creme de la Creme
Paying Forward
The Listener
What A Catch
Aren’t Paybacks Great
Grey’s Last Chance
LOL. The Duffle Bag Says It All. I’m still laughing at this one, Cathy. LOL
Batter Up
Payback
Grey’s Hot Water Dish
How to Get His Woman
Serve It Up
Tastebud sensation
My dad always thought “The Rise and Fall of the Chocolate Cake” would be a good name for a book. Since Tessa specializes in breads, maybe “As the Dough Rises.” I can’t do any better than that today. Hopefully someone else is more helpful. 😉
Oh, oh, oh! It’s THAT guy! The bag on the doorstep guy!! grr…
First I think of:
Creep’s Second Chance, Idiot of a Man, Can’t Kick Me Out Twice, but none of those are romantic.
So maybe:
Forgiving Grey
Loving Second
Not a Second too Soon
Never Second Again
Hi,
1)Hot temptation
2) The One
3) Sweet Interlude
literally translated it means the top of the milk. I would call it
Hungry for Love
Top Candidate for Love
Hungry No More
Number One in Love
A Favor for Love
A Love to Savor
Flavor of Your Heart
Tempted by You
One Tasty Temptation
Cupid’s Chef
The Way to Your Heart
The Love Wild Card
I like the sweetest catch too. It has elements of cakes and ball 🙂
Ok, since in football, a last minute attempt at a touchdown with a long pass is a Hail Mary…. “He’ll Marry for the Score” LOL “Turning the Game Around” “Second and Long” “Tackling Her Friendship to Take Her Forever” “Throwing Out the Play Book” “Love’s Blitz” “Fourth Quarter Hustler”… Ok, my brain is starting to come up with dumb stuff. LOL Good luck!
One last one “He’ll Marry for Her Love”
Then there was you. Thank you Beverley;) good luck
sweeter the 2nd time; bittersweet revenge; leaven heaven 🙂
“Twice Baked”.
“Twice Baked”. Though I must admit I do love “The Sweetest Catch” by Sheeryn. 🙂
Replay
Deja vu
I’m tardy to the party!
I like the Sweetest Catch.
My suggestions:
-To Sneak a Sweet
-The Creme Conversion
Pure Seduction
Luscious Delights
Delightful Goal
First Devotion
Double play
The bold play
The irresistible play
Luscious return
Play of temptation
Taste of hunger
Some of these are silly, I know. But it’s getting late. The book sounds like a winner, whatever you name it!
Fourth Down and Longing for Tessa
Love Scores a Touchdown
Baby I Knead Your Lovin’
Don’t Fumble Your Love
Love Needs an Overtime
Winning at Love
No Playbook for Love
Love is No Game
WIN MY LOVE or TASTE MY LOVE is all I can come up with right now.
Your new book looks so good! What a beautiful and gorgeous cover!
Cute, love football and 49ers all the way,
Just desserts
Sweet desserts
Love in the air
A taste of romance
Touchdown for love
A catch of romance
Sweet catch
Touch of sweet delight
Touch of goal
Half A Loaf Isn’t Enough
Let Love Rise A Second Time
I had others, but after typing them out, didn’t like them.
Fumbled the Perfect Loaf
Flour on the Rise
Kneading Tessa
Rocks in the Dough
Burnt Bread
Head stuck in the Flour
Spiked the Loaf
Rocks in the Bread
Hard Knocks on the Baker’s Door
Sacked Like Flour
Missed the Snap
Third and Long for the Baker
Lost the Pocket to the Baker
Offsides with the Breadmaker
Holding the Loaf
Baker Called Foul
Clipping the Breadmaker
Blitzed the Baker
Hope this helps, sorry I did not read the other entries did not think that would be fair. Hopefully no repeats
+1 for The Sweetest Catch! A great title!
Here are my suggestions:
A Dash of Spice
Kiss the Cook
Ready for Seconds
The Joy of Loving <– a tribute to Joy of Cooking book ^_^
Instant Replay
Sweet Yet Spicy
Half Time
Sweet Temptation
Shake and Bake
Tasty Morsel
Treat Me Sweet
Sweet Talk
Sweet Touch
Just a Taste
Temptation Eyes
Sweet Spot
Just a Kiss
Sweet Revenge or Revenge Tastes Sweet
Taste Please
Sweet Treat
Super Bowl
Over Time
Squeeze Play
Twice Kissed
Holding On
Time Out
Tasty Treat
First and 10
Hail Mary
Delicious
Dropped Ball
Signed, Sealed, Delivered
Payment Over Due
Half Baked Option
Fake Catch
Up Beat
Do Over
Delicious Temptation
Out of Bounds
Love On Hold
Intermission
Bake Off
Twice Baked
Yummy Treat
Creamed
Frosted Dream
Second Chances
Sweeter than honey
Delectable goodies
Sweet treat
Tout Sweet
Sweet as Icing
Caterer’s Dream
Bakers Delight
After the Heartbreak
Playing for Keeps
The Sweetest Thing
You Never Know (Until You D0)
Love Me or Lose Me
Recipe for the Sweet Life
The Love Game
This Sweet Heart of Mine
Love is the Sweetest Thing
Sweet Seduction
Tempting Tessa
A Recipe for Seduction
Playing for Keeps
I absolutely love the cover and the title!! It looks fresh, modern and sweet 😉 Can’t wait to read it.
Very cute cover, congrats on your new book!
Whipped Cream and Second Chances
The Best Thing About Us
Stirring up Love
Settling the Score, One Sweet Kiss at a Time
A Taste of Your Love
Back for Seconds
A Recipe for Love
Sweet Endings
Hi Bev, great cover – like the original font best.
I do like The Sweetest Catch, too. My input – Simmering Seduction
I like The Sweetest Catch, except that a quarterback doesn’t do any catching. Maybe you could adapt it with one of these titles:
Sweet Replay
Making a Sweet Play
A Knead For Love
Love’s Second Bloom
Love’s Sweet Knead
Second Chance Rising
One Sweet Knead
Gorgeous cover, Bev! I like the second version best, where your first name is in a different color.
Sweet Seduction
Here are some suggestions:
Swirls of Desire
Hot Cross(ed) Love (play on Hot Cross Buns)
Twice Baked Love
Proof of Your Love
Missing the piéce de resistance.
Passing on the Dessert, Not this time around.
Deciding Love Really is the Frosting- On the Cake